Are Your Emails Suffering From These 15 Copywriting No-No’s?


Recent surveys indicate that over 1/3 of permission emails consumer want to receive from trusted sources are being blocked by email filters and corporate firewalls. Chances are, your all-important email newsletters are turning up as “false positive” as well. Which words, phrases, and styles should you avoid at all costs?

Typically the way these filters and firewalls work is with tests that have certain numbers of points assigned to them. Your email message is run through each of these tests before it is delivered to the recipient. If the cumulative points score reaches a certain threshold (usually set by the email server administrator), your email is trashed rather than delivered.

You can lose points as well as gain them. Losing points is a good thing, since you want to avoid reaching the threshold value where your message is considered spam. For example, if your message contains “quoted” email text from a previous message, you can score a fair number of negative points.

15 general copywriting tips to avoid the email black hole…

* Don’t greet your recipient with a salutation beginning with “Dear”
* Don’t claim that the recipient was on a list.
* Don’t claim that the recipient registered at your site.
* Don’t claim that your message is not spam.
* Don’t claim that you obtained the recipient’s address legitimately.
* Don’t claim that the recipient gave you permission or opted in.
* Don’t claim that the recipient was registered with one of your marketing partners.
* Don’t claim that you respect all removal requests.
* Don’t claim that you comply with various regulations/House bills/Senate bills.
* Don’t explain why the recipient is receiving your offer.
* Don’t suggest that the recipient might have received the email by mistake.
* Include a copyright notice.
* Don’t use “click here” links.
* Don’t link “remove me” to an email address
* Avoid mentioning spammy-sounding words and phrases, like “opportunity,” “money back,” “incredible,” “targeted,” and “offer.” You'll want to consult our 50 Most Dangerous Trigger Words and Catch Phrases List for more on this.

Bear in mind this whole area is a constantly moving target. The rules and threshold scores of firewalls and filters are constantly changing, as spammers continue to find ways around them.

There are literally thousands of “rules” to abide by if you want to get past the filters. In future issues of grayMatter, we’ll talk about rules for your From and To line, Subject line, and the litany of rules for HTML source code. Did you know there are also ways to convince spam filters to “credit” your email rather than deduct points? Stay tuned for future issues of grayMatter!


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